ben: cinematographer turned writer

I found this on my desktop tonight. The beginnings of a story by Ben, now that the camera is out of commission. He said I could share it. And p.s. my son does not watch 24, but I like his name choices so far.

"JACK was in Asia they said there was a ancient island there was a tomb. On the island it contained a black diamond Later…at the harbor, it was night JACK was out on deck when he herd a little humming.It was the diamond black dust was coming from the sky a inch of the diamond was gone.It was pleg one the black squid .Now there were two people one was named FRANCE and the other was named BASQUE .But"